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Monday, February 7, 2011

(1) PLEASE DO CORRECT MY GRAMMAR

hello everybody..
this is my first ever English blog..
it seems that it was way too late for me..
but, every first day is catastrophe isn't it?
i'm doing this just for fun..
for sharing something with you guys.
for the start, this blog (my writing especially) might turn to be the most BORING thing that ever exists in the whole wide world..
but i hope, my writing will be better day by day..
the content and my grammar as well..
i also might talking nonsense..
so please bear with it..

this is a "hello" entry isn't it?
so i think this video might come handy..lol

"HELLO, I LOVE YOU -THE DOORS"

Hello, I love you
Won't you tell me your name?
Hello, I love you
Let me jump in your game
Hello, I love you
Won't you tell me your name?
Hello, I love you
Let me jump in your game

She's walking down the street
Blind to every eye she meets
Do you think you'll be the guy
To make the queen of the angels sigh?

Hello, I love you
Won't you tell me your name?
Hello, I love you
Let me jump in your game
Hello, I love you
Won't you tell me your name?
Hello, I love you
Let me jump in your game

She holds her head so high
Like a statue in the sky
Her arms are wicked, and her legs are long
When she moves my brain screams out this song

Sidewalk crouches at her feet
Like a dog that begs for something sweet
Do you hope to make her see, you fool?
Do you hope to pluck this dusky jewel?

Hello, Hello, Hello, Hello, Hello, Hello, Hello
I want you
Hello
I need my baby
Hello, Hello, Hello, Hello

p/s: they reckon that glee version is nicer.. but i still felt that nothing can beat the original version.. and as the oldies song fan, i will surely like this version more.







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